After I had reached the core, found it was so hard to breath
I cannot keep on remembering how there I entered
Suddenly the fear endured throughout the past became little tranquil
Surmounted there in the heart wobegone started to feel a cold wave that enclosedanamnesis collapsing in to a direful hollow
where a mild, genteel form of silvery stratum filled in
and kept back the old, specious touch
The touch that killed more dreams than a fire would
For now I think to wake up knowing that I am safe under it’s cover lying over, is enough
And I see no reason to remember anymore what is defunct
But that’s a good reason to forgetstill holding onto what made me forget, beneath this unfallacious frost..
~f.h.
Whoa! That’s some seriously good linguistic you’re throwing around, not to mention the heavy emotion. Nice writing!
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Thank you.. Glad you like it 🙂
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Loved it. I’m a former English teacher and I had to look some words up. I didn’t mind, helped me get where you were on your piece. Fabulous
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Happy to know about you.. I am very much glad to be around writers like you and I greatly appreciate your kind words..btw I’m a student of English 🙂
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Fabulous! And thank you for your kind words
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Lovely! Thank you for reading my poem “God is”. I’m so glad you lked it for it brought me to your blog which I can tell I’m going to enjoy. I’ll be back!! 🙂 Blessings! Debbie
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It was such an amazing piece of writing! Thank you for checking mine 😊😊
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I. too, taught enjoy for 30 years!!! i guess we are just drawn to emotions expressed with passion!
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Indeed. All the writers here are driven by that same force
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Spectacular, love this piece! ❤
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Thank you (:
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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